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"Mango Sunday" by 3mangos [Link]

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http://3mangos.tumblr.com/post/81369876424/hey-its-out-now-get-it-please-heres-what-you

3mangos:

HEY. IT’S OUT NOW. GET IT PLEASE.

HERE’S WHAT YOU GET WHEN YOU BUY MANGO SUNDAY:

  • A NEATO STORY WRITTEN BY NIAKITTY
  • 2 BONUS SCENES
  • ALTERNATE SCENES
  • MY LOVE

okay im tired good night everybody

also maybe sorta follow niakitty cause (s)he’s lonely
http://niacinkat.tumblr.com/

Check it out! (Direct buy link, pay what you want. UPDATE: 3Mangos changed it to a free download.)

(Grammar-related stuff below. Feel free to skip.)

…[’]cause (s)he’s lonely. Ooh, this one’s a real challenge for gender-neutral language. If you don’t want to put too much effort into this, I’d suggest you go with “their” since that’s less obtrusive.

Maybe you could replace the adverbial clause with an adjectival one: “…follow niakitty, who’s lonely” (I’d add “very” here; I think that makes it smoother.) You could also try an appositive: “…follow niakitty, a lonely person” (Again, I think “very” makes this smoother.)